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Title: Finished
Author: girlpire
Rating: NC17 or FRAO
Pairing: Angelus/William, with participation from Darla and Dru
Disclaimer: This story is based on the "Angel" series, with which I am not affiliated in any way. Joss Whedon is my master, etc.
Distribution: Please do not archive this story anywhere.
Summary: "As often happens when William engages in a new-to-him sexual activity with his family, he doesn't really understand what's going on at first."
Warnings: Explicit sex, including both het and slash.
Author's Notes: For [livejournal.com profile] spring_spangel.
Author's Notes 2: This is dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] flake_sake, who, in addition to being awesome, bought me some paid LJ time. Thank you!



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Finished

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The one and only time it happens, it happens on a day that isn't otherwise anything special.

The four of them are in bed together like usual, spending the daylight hours the same way they usually do - that is, fucking each other. William is lying on his back on the four-poster that is actually a little on the smallish side and has entirely too many feather pillows on it while Darla straddles his face, saying dirty things that he can't really hear that well, her thighs sort of muffling his ears. Drusilla rides William's cock and moans as her sire takes her from behind, Angelus also saying things that are probably very dirty, in response to whatever dirty things Darla is saying - although William can't really hear him either, just feels his thick cock pumping steadily into Dru alongside his own, the two of them separated inside her body by a thin stretch of flesh that might as well not even be there.

All of this is very normal for William. He's comfortable with it - or he's beginning to become comfortable with it, this being something they've done regularly since he was turned a few months ago. In fact, he's the one who initiated today's events. (He didn't mean to exactly - he just made a rude, half-joking suggestion to Darla, and for some reason [probably boredom] she immediately took him up on it, which resulted in his face being pressed between her naked thighs before he even realized what was happening.) But he's enjoying himself, like he always does, and that's really the whole point of the thing, so he has no complaints. And neither do the rest of them, judging by the little gasps and moans and other quiet noises he can barely hear as he further acquaints himself with his great-grandsire's endlessly fascinating and desirable womanly bits. He grasps her thighs with his hands, holding her in place over his mouth as though she might at any moment squirm away from his adventurous tongue, and he wonders, not for the first time, if there is anything in the universe that could possibly be better than this.

Which is when he finds, for the first time, that there is.

As often happens when William engages in a new-to-him sexual activity with his family, he doesn't really understand what's going on at first. He feels Angelus' cock pull out of Dru's body, which he understands well enough, and then he feels Dru being dragged off of his own cock, which he also understands, it having happened so many times before - usually by Angelus - but then he feels some shuffling around and a hand grasping his erection, positioning it against a new indentation. And then his cock is being taken in again, slowly sinking this time into the tightest, most exquisite envelopment that he's ever experienced - ever. He moans against Darla's wet flesh and digs his fingernails into her thighs, his hips arching up from the bed towards that perfect warm slide, the delicious squeeze of the gradually accommodating body he's now buried inside. That single, tight possession of his slick cock is a more intensely pleasurable sensation than he's ever imagined could exist.

And then, just barely, through the legs pressed to his ears, William hears Angelus sigh.

Despite the sigh, which could almost be called a moan, it still takes him a while to figure out what's going on. It's not that William is slow in the head or anything; it's just that, well, for one thing, he can't see properly, what with Darla sitting on his face, and his hearing is greatly reduced for the same reason. Taste and smell are also limited to Darla's sex, so all he has to go on, really, is feel. He feels the torturously slow drag of the other body pushing itself up off his cock and then the tight glide as it presses down against his hips once again, taking him in, and after feeling this many times in a row, he still doesn't quite grasp the concept that it's Angelus who is fucking him this way. It's too confusing in his mind; it's... incongruous. This isn't what they do. This isn't what their relationship is.

But oh, the idea! The idea of what must be happening, although he can't see it... Besides the incredible feel of his grandsire's body gripping him so fucking tightly, it's the very thought of being inside him that reduces William to the amateur pile of eager bones thrusting his hips too fast, losing the slow rhythm Angelus is attempting to set. It's the notion that he, William, is finally the possessor here, the one taking ownership of the other's body. He's owning Angelus! Simply by lying here on the bed, he is finally winning in a way he never dared hope he would. And Angelus is giving him this gift willingly! It's almost too much. He almost ceases to function.

All of a sudden, Darla moves off William's face and leans down to peer into his eyes with a frustrated expression. "Did you really tire of me that quickly, William, or have you forgotten how your mouth works?" she asks.

William inhales deeply and darts his tongue out to lick her slickness from his lips. "Um," he says. "Sorry." His voice hitches as Angelus clenches around him. "Got... distracted."

Darla rolls her eyes and starts to climb off the bed, apparently having had enough. And when she moves out of his field of vision, he finally sees happening what he's so far only imagined in his head.

Angelus is sitting astride William's hips, rocking up and down very slowly - much, much too slowly - one hand resting on William's stomach while the other is tangled in Drusilla's hair. He's holding her head down, thrusts up into her mouth as she leans over William's side, then pushes his hips down to take in William's cock, then thrusts up into the perfect O of Dru's lips again. Angelus is watching Drusilla's face as he fucks her mouth, gripping her hair hard, whispering to her, "Ah, that's right, use your tongue now, there's a good lass..." and William is staring at the two of them with his lips slightly parted, seeing but still - still - not believing that the scourge of fucking Europe is riding his cock.

Darla wanders back over to the side of the bed carrying a glass of brandy and sips it thoughtfully as she also watches Angelus and Drusilla. William is grasping the sheets in his fists, clenching his teeth together, trying to maintain control without calling out and embarrassing himself. Darla looks at his face, then back over at Angelus. "How is he?" she asks him.

"Hmm?" says Angelus, glancing up at her. "Who?" He continues his steady movements above William, twisting his fingers more tightly into Dru's hair. She whimpers around his cock.

"The boy," Darla says, indicating William. "How do you like his prick?"

"Oh," says Angelus. He looks as though he's only just noticing that it's inside him. "I suppose it's good enough," he offers. "How was his mouth?"

Good enough? William thinks. Good enough? He's having the most amazing experience of his life, and they're talking about him as though he's not even here!

"Abysmal," Darla sighs. "Do you know, I actually think he's getting worse?"

Angelus chuckles, then hisses as Drusilla's teeth graze him. He pulls her off his cock and glares at her, then shoves her face back down and thrusts into her mouth again, and she squeaks. He looks up at Darla. "Shall I offer my services, then?" he asks politely.

She smiles. "Why yes, thank you, dear," she replies, setting her glass on the small table beside the bed. "How very thoughtful of you."

"It's my pleasure," Angelus says, and William suddenly, without warning, finds himself landing atop Drusilla on the hard floor beside the bed, the both of them having been flung aside to make room on the smallish space for their elders.

"Hey!" William cries out indignantly. He scrambles to his feet, immediately desperate to be back where he'd been only a moment before, deep inside Angelus. "But we haven't -- I'm not even -- We're not finished!" he protests. His erection is standing out from his body, impossibly hard, glistening.

Drusilla giggles from the floor. "Silly William," she admonishes, also getting to her feet. She slides her arms around William's body and leans into him, her pert nipples pressed to his back. "Of course you are."

On the bed, Angelus and Darla don't acknowledge this exchange at all, having already become wholly immersed in each other.

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Date: 2008-03-28 09:24 am (UTC)
elisi: Clara asking the Doctor to take her back to 2012 (Darla by glenien)
From: [personal profile] elisi
Oh oh oh! This was just... *searches for word*... perfect.

Date: 2008-03-30 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
oh, thank you! i wasn't sure how well it would go over, considering that it sort of breaks the fandom taboo of angelus bottoming. i'm glad you liked it. :)

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Date: 2008-03-28 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH *loves*

William's whole thought process was just perfect. oh god. poor clueless little thing. *doinks him* owning Angelus *snorfles*

Date: 2008-03-30 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
i'm so glad you liked it!

william's only a few months old here; he still has a lot to learn. :)

Date: 2008-03-28 11:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] denny-dc.livejournal.com
Excellent. That's not just hot, that was just damn good.

Date: 2008-03-30 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thanks! :)
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Date: 2008-03-30 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thank you!

I absolutely can imagine the entire taboo suddenly being blown wide apart by Angelus casually fucking himself on Spike like some kind of toy

yay, that's just what i wanted! most of fandom - like william here - has this idea that angelus is so untouchable, but i don't think he'd think anal sex was such a humongous taboo. (and if he did, he'd be all the more likely to do it, right?) so it's fun to write him in a completely different way from the norm, yet still keep him in character. :)

Date: 2008-03-28 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com
Angelus just taking what he wants from Will and Dru is just perfect, and his and Darla's nonchalant dismissal was cruelly in character. I loved Darla's position keeping Will a bit outside the action.

I loved the eagerness and triumph in this: "It's the notion that he, William, is finally the possessor here, the one taking ownership of the other's body. He's owning Angelus! Simply by lying here on the bed, he is finally winning in a way he never dared hope he would." How completely wrong William is. Angelus and Darla are always the possessors.

Date: 2008-03-28 08:40 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] makd.livejournal.com
ITA: Angelus and Darla are always the possessors.

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Date: 2008-03-28 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-dark-ami.livejournal.com
Oh that was wonderful! I was smiling all the way through and the end, so funny. Poor clueless boy. Loved hearing William’s thoughts.

It's the notion that he, William, is finally the possessor here, the one taking ownership of the other's body. He's owning Angelus!
Oh silly boy, you don’t own him. But you can dream :)

Date: 2008-03-30 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
i'm so glad you enjoyed it! you're right - william is both clueless and silly. :)

Date: 2008-03-28 08:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] deird1
This was just perfect.

Date: 2008-03-30 02:10 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-03-28 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com
Oh, this was quite funny. Poor Spike, getting put in his place in the most explicit way possible.

Date: 2008-03-30 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thanks! i'm afraid poor spike will have to become used to landing on the floor whenever darla's around. :)

Date: 2008-03-28 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missus-grace.livejournal.com
You totally nailed the Fanged Four. I mean characterization-wise. Unless you came into the scene afterwards and seduced 'em while they were too sated to protest :)

Date: 2008-03-30 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thanks!

seduced 'em while they were too sated to protest

what makes you think they wouldn't want me? i'm kinda awesome, i'll have you know. ;)

Date: 2008-03-29 12:45 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] flake-sake.livejournal.com
Oh This is so wonderful! I love it! *jumps and cuddles you* *retreats to respectable distance*

This is just perfect. William feeling all king-of-the-worldy and Angelus being the posterboy for casual cruelty, or rather cruel casualty.
That's just the way I could see Angelus fuck himself on William, being dominant all the way not giving up anything to him.

"Abysmal," Darla sighs. "Do you know, I actually think he's getting worse?"
She is so evil!!! Loved her exchange with Angelus. Those two really rule at being mean.

*loves* THank you sooooo much!

Date: 2008-03-30 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
yay, you like it! i want you to know that i wrote this completely for you before i even realized [livejournal.com profile] spring_spangel was already going on. it's based on our conversation in [this thread (http://girlpire.livejournal.com/152993.html?thread=2782113#t2782113)]. i wanted to write you a believable william-topping-angelus ficlet, and the easiest way to make it believable to me is to have angelus not really thinking of it as that big a deal, you know? because i think if he realized how important william thought it was, he would never have done it.

anyway, i'm glad you liked it! how was your test?

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Date: 2008-03-29 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] of-too-minds.livejournal.com
Whoa!

That was hot. Poor William. The only fuck you can really count on with Angelus is a mindfuck. ;)

Date: 2008-03-30 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
too true! i'm glad you liked it. :)

Date: 2008-03-29 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cafedemonde.livejournal.com
HEEE! Smoking and fun! Once again William gets it all wrong, thinking he's in charge for even a moment.

Abysmal! Poor thing!

Date: 2008-03-30 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thanks!

i can't blame william, though. i think i'd be abysmal as well if angelus started distracting me that way. :)

Date: 2008-03-29 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clawofcat.livejournal.com
*snickers* I do love a good Fanged Four tale. William is so giddy and eager about his realization concerning whose orifice is hugging his prick that you feel sorry for the poor lout when he gets the shove off. Of course, Dru being the elder child knows how it is. I imagine her seeing to William herself now that they've been dismissed by the 'rents.

Gotta say, the image of Angelus riding Spike's cock with Dru sucking him off does make quite a picture. I can see him being sort of bored and apathetic about the whole thing just trying to past the time until dark when the real murder and mayhem begins.

Favorite part was his exchange with Darla about Spike's poor oral skills and Angelus' polite offer to see to Darla himself. They are one of the best evil couples ever. I wish there was more Dangelus? in the fandom. Darla is such a wicked treat.

Thanks for this!

Date: 2008-03-30 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
I imagine her seeing to William herself now that they've been dismissed by the 'rents.

i see that happening as well - and william not being completely satisfied with her ever again after what he just experienced. i think angelus ruined him. :D

I can see him being sort of bored and apathetic about the whole thing just trying to past the time until dark

that's sort of how i picture it, too. maybe not bored exactly, but he certainly doesn't see it as a big deal like william does. he's just like, anal sex. what.

They are one of the best evil couples ever.

my otp, let me show you it! :D

thanks for the fb.

Date: 2008-03-29 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acacia5.livejournal.com
That was excellent, and a wonderful start for [livejournal.com profile] spring_spangel. Thank you.

Date: 2008-03-30 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thank you, i'm glad you liked it. :)

Date: 2008-03-29 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/peasant_/
Yep, that's how I've always imagined it must have been. The suggestion that Angelus wouldn't make use of his 'other rooster in the henhouse' for the one thing the girls can't do for him has always struck me as daft. Thank you.

Date: 2008-03-30 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
when i wrote this, i was wondering why fandom thinks of angelus getting it up the butt as being such a big taboo. people say that he's so alpha that he'd never submit to another dude like that, but that implies that anal sex is emasculating... and i sort of don't get why it would be. i have a hard time picturing angelus turning down any kind of act that would bring him pleasure.

on the other hand, i suppose if he thought william would get the wrong idea - if he thought william would look at it as owning or controlling him - then he would never do it, simply because he'd never willingly allow william's thoughts to go in that direction.

but i liked writing this because i wanted to show angelus being penetrated and still being very obviously alpha/in control, which is a thing i can say i've never ever seen in a fic before. heh, you totally didn't ask for a long explanation, but i just gave you one anyway. thanks for the fb! :)

Date: 2008-03-30 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eyezrthewindows.livejournal.com
Hot right up till the end where it got funny. *snicker*

Poor William.

Date: 2008-03-30 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thank you! poor william indeed. :)

Date: 2008-03-30 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkspace99.livejournal.com
*giggles* Awwww, poor William. Maybe if he's a good boy and keeps quiet while the elders play, Angelus will reward him later.

Excellent piece!

Date: 2008-03-30 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thanks very much! i picture william sulking for quite a while after this. days, even. :)

Date: 2008-03-31 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spankspike.livejournal.com
I loved this from beginning to end.

Everyone was so perfectly in character. Darla self-centered and mocking William's technique, Drusilla giggly and scolding William for thinking he'd get more than he already had, Angelus taking pleasure from William while nearly ignoring his existence entirely, and then our boy William completely in awe of the privilege he was being given as his sire rode him.

It was wonderful. Though I can't imagine what fool wouldn't want to continue being fucked by William/Spike. But I'm sure Dru will probably take care of him quite nicely.

Date: 2008-03-31 01:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thanks, tisa! i'm so glad you liked it. :D

hey, did you know about dragon*con this year? james marsters will be there. it would be a perfect time to go... if you wanted. i'm just saying. (i'm going dressed as fray! with blue hair and everything!)

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Date: 2008-03-31 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hello-spikey.livejournal.com
Wow, brutal, pervy fanged four! With quite the foursome action!

*swoon*

Date: 2008-03-31 08:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
i take it that means you enjoyed? if so, thanks! :)

Date: 2008-04-01 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zoesmith.livejournal.com
Angelus… Angelus is… he- he’s riding William’s cock… he’s letting William… and he’s acting like it’s not that important, and oh my God poor Spike is so overwhelmed, and is that how you top from the bottom? *brain has melted by the image*

Excuse my incoherence but that was just so Guuuuhhhh!!!
Thank you so much!

Date: 2008-04-02 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
yay! haha, yes, that is exactly how one tops from the bottom. :D i'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2008-04-02 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petzipellepingo.livejournal.com
Poor William, always being put in his place by his "elders".

Date: 2008-04-03 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
it's true. but i wouldn't have it any other way. :)

Date: 2008-04-03 09:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] laisserais
Darla looks at his face, then back over at Angelus. "How is he?" she asks him.

"Hmm?" says Angelus, glancing up at her. "Who?"
HEE! So. Awesome. this entire thing had me laughing out loud. so perfectly angelus and darla! :D

Date: 2008-04-04 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thanks! i'm glad you liked it!

i read a fic of yours the other day and absolutely loved it... i can't remember the title now. :( lemme go see which one it was.

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Date: 2008-04-08 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
thanks!

umbridged. that's a good word.

Date: 2009-07-13 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spuffyaddict.livejournal.com
Poor Spike! Angelus wasn't really bottoming, though, was he? He was in total control of the situation, and on top, which is so very much like him - just using Spike and Dru. Awesome job!

Date: 2010-06-26 08:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] si-zilla.livejournal.com
Excellent. Very realistic. Receiving most definately does not mean bottoming. One thing i'm sometimes disappointed in is that bottoming or receiving seems so often mean submissive. Maybe I have just read too much DS- porn :D . Thanks for this.
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